12 March, 2014

DRAFT SCRIPT

Draft Updated Script                                                                                                                            Title - 'Reaper'
INTERNAL SHOT-JACK'S HOUSE- DAY                                                                                                           
THERE IS A MONTAGE OF CLOSE UPS AND EXTREME CLOSE UPS OF POWDERED DRUGS, LIGHTER, SYRINGE, SPOON, TWENTY POUND NOTE ROLLED UP. SOUND: TENSE AND FOREBODING MUSIC

THE SHOT THEN CUTS TO A VISUAL EFFECT, OF A BLACK SUBSTANCE ENTERING THE BLOODSTREAM.

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THE NEXT SHOT IS OF A CRACKED, DIRTY WALL. THE CAMERA PANS DOWNWARDS AND THE BACK OF JACK'S HEAD IS SEEN.FROM THIS POINT ONWARD THERE IS THE SAME DIEGETIC MUSIC (PLAYED ON THE PIANO)OF BEETHOVEN - MOONLIGHT SONATA

THERE IS THEN A CUT TO A CLOSE UP.IT IS THE REAPER, WHO IS PLAYING THE FIVE FINGER FILLET.

SHOT THEN CUTS TO A MID SHOT OF A PIANO AND JACK PLAYING THE PIANO. IN THE SHOT YOU ARE ABLE TO SEE A SPOON, COCAINE/CREDIT CARD AND LIGHTER.

SHOT CUTS BACK TO A CLOSE UP OF THE REAPER PLAYING THE FIVE FINGER FILLET BUT THEN ALMOST INSTANTLY CUTS TO AN OVER THE SHOULDER SHOT OF JACK (WEARING WHITE) PLAYING THE PIANO (SPOON AND LIGHTER IS VISIBLE)

THERE IS THEN A MID SHOT OF THE REAPER FROM THE SIDE PLAYING THE FIVE FINGER FILLET. THE AUDIENCE ARE NOW ABLE TO SEE THAT THE REAPER IS WEARING A BLACK HOODIE, AND THE HOOD IS UP, THEREFORE UNABLE TO SEE HIS FACE.

THERE IS THEN A CLOSE UP OF JACKS RIGHT HAND PLAYING THE PIANO IT CUTS TO A CLOSE UP OF A SHOT WHICH IS SEEN IN POINT OF VIEW OF THE PIANO LID, WHERE THE REAPER (ESTABLISHED BY HIS BLACK CLOTHING) IS SEEN PLAYING THE FIVE FINGER FILLET.

THERE IS THEN AN EXTREME CLOSE UP OF JACKS FINGERS PLAYING THE PIANO BEFORE IT ONCE AGAIN CUTS BACK TO THE POV SHOT OF THE REAPER PLAYING THE FIVE FINGER FILLET.

THERE IS THEN A MID SHOT OF JACK (ESTABLISHED BY HIS WHITE CLOTHING) PLAYING THE PIANO FROM A SIDE ANGLE. THE LIGHTER, SPOON AND POWDERED DRUG ARE ALL VISIBLE.THE SHOT THEN CUTS BACK TO THE SAME POV SHOT OF THE REAPER PLAYING THE FIVE FINGER FILLET.
THERE IS THEN A MID SHOT OF JACK PLAYING THE PIANO FROM THE RIGHT. THE SHOT IS IN THE SAME LEVEL AS THE PIANO KEYS.

THE NEXT SHOT IS A MID SHOT OF THE REAPER PLAYING THE FIVE FINGER FILLET, THE SHOT IS NOW FROM THE LEFT SIDE AND IS SLIGHTLY HIGH ANGLED. IT CUTS TO THE RIGHT SIDE OF THE REPAER PLAYING THE GAME. HE IS NOW PLAYING AT A RAPID SPEED AND HE THEN CUTS HIMSELF, ONCE CUTTING HIMSELF THE SHOT CUTS TO A HIGHER ANGLE OF THE REPAER PLAYING THE GAME; HE PLAYS IT SLOWER THIS TIME.

THERE IS THEN A POV SHOT OF THE REAPER PLAYING THE FIVE FINGER FILLET. THE VIEWER NOW SEES WHAT THE REAPER SEES.

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THERE IS THEN A MID SHOT OF THE REAPER (UNABLE TO SEE FACE, AS IT IS COVERED BY THE HOOD AND THE SHOT CUTS OUT HALF THE FACE)USING A LIGHTER UP CLOSE TO THE CAMERA.

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